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Teen Poetry #8
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krad008
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 82
0 posted 2008-04-28 04:37 PM

This poem is rather strange, but its not hard to figure out

Its you
No maybe its you
No not at all its you
Its the goose
No its the duck
No your still wrong its the robin

Why
Why is this so confusing
Where are you
Who are you
Which one
I dont no anymore

Ive let the robin go
So is it the goose ?
Perhaps its the duck.....
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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
1 posted 2008-04-28 10:29 PM

I was a lil confused but other wise it was pretty good.

*-crazycece-*
Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota
2 posted 2008-05-05 12:35 PM

wonderful i like how its weaved together.
it was a little odd but otherwise i enjoyed it.
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