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Teen Poetry #8

Painful dreams

spiderilia
Junior Member

since 2008-04-24

Posts 21
Israel

0 posted 2008-05-03 02:00 PM

Painful dreams

havent seen you a week,
havent seen you at all,
I have seen you today,
and I feel like I fall...

poem is breaking from me
from this feeling inside
why this feeling is back?
this I can not decide

so I will close my eyes
to see dreams that I miss,
but now all I can see
is your look, feel your kiss

I know those I wont have
and Im acting like fool
when I open my eyes
I feel pain, its so cruel...

I really hope that nobody here feels this way...

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-05 08:33 AM

Sadly Spiderillia, i know this feeling all too well. You discribed the emotion with exilence! Great work!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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