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0 posted 2008-04-26 10:34 AM



Signs and Visions

In a vision of deadly certain doom
I see a huge sun swallow the moon
And darkness floods the land and sky
But I’m not afraid- and I know why

The prophecy of years gone past
Is coming forth, for now, at last
And though I see the darkness come,
As moon is dancing ‘round the sun

The fear the wicked soon would feel
Has no place- for me unreal
I feel so odd, it soon is clear
I’ve done the right- no need for fear

I sit with mother, sister, brother
Watching skies without a cover
And yet I find redeeming grace
In knowing I shall see his face

A vision that inspired awe
For me it seems to rightly draw
The sense that something, goodly, more
May walk right through my crimson door

And change, with all his fingers light
The color blood to color white
My Savior, King, the Lord of Hosts
Hath guided me with Holy Ghost

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

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1 posted 2008-04-26 10:48 AM


Oh Wow Kate!! This is perfect! I never had read a poem about the apacolypse or rapture. This was the perfect poem to read!! Love it!

~Zach~



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2 posted 2008-04-26 05:55 PM


OHHH! I didn't know what it was talking about at first but then I read Zach's comment and I get it now. heheh, great poem.

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3 posted 2008-04-29 08:14 PM


in mormonism we call it the Second Coming.

I live in a Bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

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