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Belinda
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since 2006-01-30
Posts 126
UK

0 posted 2008-04-21 05:36 PM



fist i'm wrong for not trying,
then get shot down when i do.
you seem like you're jealous,
i know that much is true.

one minute you still feel it,
the next it's the cold shoulder,
i wish you'd let me through,
move that metaphoric boulder.

show some blooming emotion,
this is what i just can't stand.
you get to deal the cards again,
giving me the dodgy hand.

no more playing your mind games,
i'm through and i give in,
no more fighting for your love
the battle's over, you win.

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

© Copyright 2008 Belinda Black - All Rights Reserved
masksrlife
Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
1 posted 2008-04-21 05:47 PM


THis was a very good write! I really enjoyed reading it thank you!

*-crazycece-*

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-04-21 06:06 PM


good job, i enjoyed this as well

JJ

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2008-04-21 08:02 PM


Always love your stuff BB, thanks for the attention to my stuff of late, it feels nice to get back in the loop. lol. Missed reading you.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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