Teen Poetry #8 |
imma come over |
justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thats not really the title but yea if u ever do me wrong dont worry i'll be strong i'll deal wit whatever you put me through cuz baby i'm in love wit you every night i cry cuz without you i'm weak i feel like i'm about ta die please give me some time ta confess dont put me under stress i wanna be with you i'm running outta time so the next time i see you imma tell you that im still in love wit you umm this is kinda just ran outta my mouth or was it my mind well yea |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
this was great. good job :] if u ever do me wrong dont worry i'll be strong i'll deal wit whatever you put me through cuz baby i'm in love wit you best stanza :] great rhyme. only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thnx V i made it today it just came out sorta |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
it was good. song or poem? only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
idk yet i might make it into a song iono maybe |
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