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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-04-20 11:15 AM

Letting Go

“He was right. I did love him, but not enough to change this- only enough to hurt us both more.” –Eclipse (Stephenie Myers)

I’ve realized I can’t keep up
The false pretense to save
It’s slowly putting me to sleep
Or (at worst) the grave

I can’t just say it gently
One of us will break
It seems your hardened shell,
Or mine, will sure sorely ache

But forward runs my weary soul
To tell you painful news
We just won’t work- I’m bad for you
I’m sorry we both lose

So instead of growing fonder
Of your wnow too real façade
It’s still pushing over
The purpose, for it, made

So now we both must part
And take our separate ways
I’m sorry, my once cherished love
They say all pains do fade . . .

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (04-21-2008 08:00 PM).]

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-20 06:25 PM

This is amazing i love it soo much...i feel what you wrote, and i can really relate ...library

JJ

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-04-20 06:40 PM

I'm sorry you still hurt. I'm glad you still love.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-04-21 07:30 AM

thanks jj, thanks frank

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-04-21 10:41 PM

nice, sad poem!
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2008-04-21 10:49 PM

omg ECLIPSE!!!!!! this totally captured the feeling between bella and jacob!! (that is what u were intending correct?) well n e ways i loved it its going in my library!!! awwww bella...and poor jacob too...i root for edward of course but still feel sry for jacob. luv u bunches!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2008-04-22 01:31 PM

rebel rebel, what would i do with out you- it displays me and my own jacob black, seems i hit close to home with bella (my school and church nickname, lol)

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

7 posted 2008-04-22 02:38 PM

very good poem i felt a true saddnes.
i love Eclipse one of my favor it book. I like the other two of course but, that on more.

im lost in a world of love

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

8 posted 2008-04-22 05:22 PM

hey hey,
i absolutely LOVE the twilight series! and you are just the person who could write a poem worthy to represent bella's feelings!!! i loved it, great write.
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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