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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
Now I've been pretty happy lately and well unless your a frequent reader of my stuff you might get confused. This switches back and forth between who im talking about. Its about 2 people. You will have to read it carefully to see where im switching back and forth And thanks for your comments! I've found another smile It meets mine when ever I see hers I no its the right thing to let my old girl go Its been tough to move on. But Im ok I never thought I would of found another This isn't a rebound This isn't just to get back at her This is what I see as Something that can go somewhere Gimme a chance please I promise Ill make it all worthwhile Your eyes meet mine And I need to give this a chance Im not gonna let this go I have a soft heart so please Don't be rough Driving away and moving on shes disappearing from my life slowly And a new smile is appearing into my life now We both know its for the best Girl your beautiful Lets go places this summer Concerts Parks Shows Movies Restraunts Girl I wanna spend all my time with you I wanna know you I wanna get to no you more Im done with you I've drove myself away from you And Im moving on |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Yea for me it wasn't that hard to see who was who. I like this poem. It really explains how i deal with break ups and stuff like that. Also!! Did i just hear someone say library? lol Yes this is going in my library!! Great work!!! ~Zach~ |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
ha thanks man |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This WAS good! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
This was a strong poem, it didn't rymne is some places but still good |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
NICE I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
ty very much all |
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