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Teen Poetry #8

Past Feeling

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-04-22 02:47 PM

Past Feeling

I’m afraid I’ve lost most feeling
I can’t believe it’s true
I’m afraid that I have died and gone
Up high past the blue

Where pain, itself, once seated
It’s heightened vain in heart
I now know something’s pushing
All feeling there depart

The guilt you try to press
In desperation’s plea
Is only getting halfway too
Where you would it be

My heart now longer functions
I don’t know what I feel
The time I have spent crying
Doesn’t seem so real

Love grows Softly in the Blinding Sun . . .

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

1 posted 2008-04-22 02:58 PM

I feel it I really do. The heartache is so obvise. I can't say that I know what your exactly feeling, but I Do some what

im lost in a world of love

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

2 posted 2008-04-22 07:28 PM

omg thiz is so amazing it made me cry but itz a good poem lol....you always expres how i feel...lol..sry and hope it getz better,,,,
LUV
Adreanna

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-04-22 09:10 PM

Thanks guys. long story short- i live in a bella world. only everyone is blindingly human . . .

-Kate

Love grows Softly in the Blinding Sun . . .

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-04-22 09:34 PM

Library. Very good expression.

I prefer noon to twilight, but tis a fine line I walk.

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