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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-21 06:52 PM


You look at her and recognize that pain in her eyes
The same pain reflecting back in your own
You used to be the best of friends
Until one day a boy got in the way
Fighting and screaming, you’re friendship started to drown
Drowning in the mistakes both of you made
You hurt each other, you need to understand
Don’t let a boy get in the way of your love for each other
Each night and everyday, I cry for you, my friends
Praying you would talk to each other and figure this out
Your friendship’s too strong to let it go to waste
She was the one you told everything to
And now you sit in your room, crying because you think
All that you had is now wasted
It’s not gone, it’s lingering in the depths of tomorrow
Embrace each other and talk about it
I’ll be here for you both until you can make it on your own
I believe in you

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2008-04-21 10:09 PM


this was good and a reallly sad but unfortunately common story. i hope things work out for ur friends

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Britt_Brat
Junior Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 37
Knoxville, TN
2 posted 2008-04-22 03:23 PM


i know how you feel. though i dont have 2 friend fighting. Im fighting with what i thought to be my best friend

Is it to be true that you would hurt me

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