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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321


0 posted 2008-04-20 03:50 AM



God i feel so cold
i dont feel Your warmth
why is Your word untold
i need You near
i need You to be here with me
this pain
i feel maim
this anger i cant contain
i wanna go to church
its the best way i hear Your word
i feel burdened
dont know if i'll ever hear another sermon
God i need You
i dont wanna leave You
again.....


please forgive me
if u dont see me
in another holy place
wanting so bad
to see Your face
forgive me
if i dont come
i'll do my own devotions
to become
more like You
forgive me


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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2008-04-20 11:43 AM


this was good....but whats this about?

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

2 posted 2008-04-20 01:29 PM


i had a dream that i got shot
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
3 posted 2008-04-20 04:13 PM


tell me in person

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

4 posted 2008-04-20 04:26 PM


that i got shot
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-04-20 06:21 PM


are you were scared of death? great write here!

JJ

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