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Teen Poetry #8

FREE'D BY LOVE

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-04-19 03:05 PM

this was a poem i made at 5 in the morning so yea
i dont have the original with me but this is what i remember oh n i kinda added more to it

ive been hiding in the shadows of my lies
ive been walking through the darkness where souls ask why
there in the deep you will here my cries..
"IM LOST!IM LOST! SHOW ME THE LIGHT!"
Though my friends didnt hear/heed my voice
there was One who did
He was with me through it all
when i was confused
when i called
i felt safe in His presence
i felt like i was in heaven
i felt free'd by love
by His love

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-04-19 05:46 PM

Hummmm, I know this feeling. TO just know that, imperfect and sinful as you are, He loves you. Wonderful poem darling, simply marvolous.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-04-20 12:40 PM

this was awsome!
but um...u dont need the ' in freed

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

3 posted 2008-04-20 03:51 AM

lol yea well it looked cool when i wrote it in like 5 in the morning well it looked right lol
well thnx

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2008-04-20 01:45 PM

thnx Kate

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-04-20 06:22 PM

nice write

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