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Subtlety |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks to Assasin of Verse and his exelent challenge for this one. Subtlety Spinning like a spiders web My words go subtly round The dark secluded corners know The secrets of the ground What is our condemnation It is as our cities walled Defended by gorillas Forever cruelly sound Here is our poetry The prose of simple slang The bells of defeat they rang Signaling these lovers pains These are the grins of severed words Our Twisted sense of power The subtlety of word and deed Delay the reckoning hour "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh Frank I loved this!!!! great poem for the challenge  Krysti |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
waaaaaaaaaaa-ohhhhhhhhh frank! my waht a wonderful thing it is- library . . . . lol. I really loved it!@ -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
good job!! i really like this JJ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks guys! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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