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Teen Poetry #8

Each Silent Breath

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2008-04-19 06:54 PM

Each Silent Breath

Each silent breath has carried
The weight of one whole world
And yet this heavy feeling
Has got my reasons curled

Questions I haven’t answered
Quiet lies I had to tell
Have wrapped me in their silent web
And extremist’s form of hell

A surprise as sadness catches
My happy star-crossed sphere
But then- now who could blame me
I’ve lost what I hold dear

But as the sadness wanes
As times goes on in time
These thoughts and simple feeling
Are molded into rhyme

Now each silent breath
Has no heavy hope
Instead a surge of longing-
My only length of rope

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (04-20-2008 08:26 AM).]

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-19 11:48 PM

i really like this good jjob/!!

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-04-20 01:45 AM

nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

3 posted 2008-04-20 02:46 AM

Oh yeah, I really like this! Great thoughts!

V/r,

Virtual Abyss

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-04-20 05:44 PM

Am I alowed to be worried as well? This poem ends with great hope so I hope it's that way with you. (you know and that's not just a prophisy.)

Great job anyway definatly a library piece!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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