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Teen Poetry #8
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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2008-04-20 04:42 AM



Here in this lonely road
Living in a world so cold
Surviving by a breath of life
Choosing whether to live or die
Comatose in this foolish lie
Waking up
From a dream of truth
Waking up
from my teenage youth
Shivers go down my spine
Wondering where the light
Will shine........

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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2008-04-20 11:43 AM


DANNNNG this was goood.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

2 posted 2008-04-20 01:29 PM


thnx V

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-20 06:23 PM


Nice write

JJ

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