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justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-04-16 07:50 PM

this might not make sense to anyone but yea well at least the beginning or maybe even the whole thing so sorry

God was always there
for you and i
when we were lovers
when we were fools

i broke it up
cuz i was confused

i started to build up anger
build up hate
and the result of my crime
was loosing you
and almost loosing my faith

i dont deny what ive said to you
but i do regret what ive done
ive always loved you
and the truth is
youre the only one

im sorry that i hurt you
caused you tremendous pain
but i guess
its fair to let you play a game
go ahead play hard to get
i'll wait
im not gonna give up yet....
............

everytime
i see you
theres fire going through my veins
my heart beats faster
and all i feel is pain
cuz ive lost you
idk if i'll be able to get you back
everyday i think about you
wondering where youre at

i never thought i deserved you
i truly never wanted us to fall apart
i tore us up
and even broke your heart

i wish you could run back to me
i wish everything would be ok
i dont want you to be afraid of me
i wish we could forget about the old days

i truly am changing
i wish you could just see
i wish we could be together again
then you could see the real me

i love you.......

yeah um this is kinda a random thing it seems like but yea

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-17 08:48 PM

doesnt that suck so much and i totally understand! to much so...great poem and this is defenitly a library!

JJ

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-18-2008 12:38 AM).]

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2008-04-17 09:31 PM

thank you

first i thought u meant my poem sucked...

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-04-17 11:39 PM

no no no sorry about that its great!! i changed it

JJ

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-18-2008 12:38 AM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-04-18 11:55 AM

ohh WOW I really loved this poem one of my fav. from yooh.. by far. thew flow the words.. everything!!!
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-04-19 06:23 PM

oh no, no no no, every where i turn people are saying his words . . .beautifully done, but heartwretching- for me. I"m that other person and i'm forever lost to him. oh man memories. sorry sorry. sorry. oh i want to want to not want to cry.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2008-04-20 12:36 PM

its funny that i read this right as u sat "u were ..my best friend"......

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

7 posted 2008-04-20 04:01 AM

wait hows that funny... well yea

thnx

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

8 posted 2008-04-20 11:44 AM

still great tho....

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

9 posted 2008-04-21 05:56 PM

i liked this alot.
brought a tear to my eye, possibly not what i needed to read right now haha.

great write though.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

Bob K
Member Elite

since 2007-11-03

Posts 4208

10 posted 2008-04-22 09:46 AM

Dear justanotherstorm,

The man still admires your poetry. Nobody else can speak for him, but doesn't that sound like a bit of a soul connection to you? Of course, who can tell, right?

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

11 posted 2008-04-22 05:30 PM

hey hey,
great poem. i guess it didn't make all that much sence, but ur style was really awsome. you have really great flow, and practically every thing i read by u astounds me! keep up the great job!
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

12 posted 2008-04-22 06:42 PM

thanks Belinda and Tracy
oh and yea if u dont really know me then yea u wont get some of this sometimes i dont get what i write lol but yea thanks

Bob...um i dont understand..??

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

13 posted 2008-05-05 03:22 PM

i think you should talk to my ex he could use a wake up call like that.lol. idk, the poem just reminded me of him. it's a great poem. very well written.

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

14 posted 2008-05-05 07:24 PM

wow....simply amazing.......i can understand what your going through and it does suck horribly...but everything happens for a purpose maybe this is a sign to you... just think about it

beautifully written

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