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Teen Poetry #8

In the end

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-04-14 07:36 PM

I made you a promise
Im devoted to keep it
and I AM still in love with you
you just have to deal with it

Im sorry Ive hurt you
caused you so much pain
but baby
I'll never hurt you like that
Ever again

But you wonder what's making me sad
Do you know what's hurting me
Sometimes I'm jealous or even get mad
It's that youre in love with him
I can see it in your eyes its him
But i have to except that

Love who you love
I'll just take a step back
I dont need to wait
Cuz the answer is him
I aint gonna hesitate

But still i promised you
Till the end
We will remain
Best friends
(but thats only an if
cuz first we have to become
,close,friends)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-14 07:53 PM

Whoa i know how you feel on this one dude..

i think im gunna send this to my old girlfriend..(still have feelings towards her obviously)

thanks for the great read!!!

~Zach~

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-04-15 05:03 PM

lots of emotion, great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-04-15 07:13 PM

great poem

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2008-04-16 12:40 PM

thanks

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