Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
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2008-04-14
07:15 PM
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So close to you.. Floating above it all, flying in the sky So close yet so far.. With you I'll defy
the laws of gravity and all its rules I feel so close to you, dancing here tonight We're so different and yet the same As different as dark and light
But with out each other there would be nothing
Slow dancing away from it all Like drifting in the tides Sparkling lights illuminate your beauty You just glance back and with a smile wide
I just don't want to let go of this perfect moment
I feel so alive. Life will go by I don't want to be here without I want you to be by my side
The music will soon stop And we'll take our separate parts I just want to hold you I knew this feeling from the start
It's the feeling of love
I knew this wasn't in my mind You can feel this too Slowly i reach for your hand Lean in forward gazeing into your eyes made of blue
Closer we get together..
The music comes to its finish The final hanging note End this fairytale ending this is all he wrote...
I step back Couples are starting to part But we were just so close I can feel it in my heart
We're so close yet so far...
---------------------------------------------- For those who don't know. Today is the aniversery of the titanic sinking. Hope you enjoy my poem!!~Zach~
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© Copyright
2008
Zach Booker-Scott
- All Rights Reserved
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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
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2008-04-14
07:25 PM
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good job i did enjoy this!!JJ
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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
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2008-04-14
10:15 PM
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I LOVE THIS POEM! i don't know why..but i do! L.I.B.R.A.R.Y!!!!!!!! {~~*~~}{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] {`~Emily~`}
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Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
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2008-04-14
11:42 PM
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Soo many applications!! So many meanings!!! Need I say more?"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl
"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy)
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imsimplyme
Junior Member
since 2008-04-01
Posts 16
California
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2008-04-15
10:34 PM
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wow, thats was really awesome. it had so much emotion in it, it was like out of the movie or something
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