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StolenDreams
Junior Member

since 2008-01-22

Posts 11
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2008-04-04 01:19 AM

My brain is wracked with the pain of 1000 worries;
I wish it was one blizzard instead of many flurries;
Its killing me and stealing my life;
Causing so much anxiety and extra strife;

Do you have a way for me to fight it off;
Maybe a way to at least fight until a stand-off;
Cause these times aren't getting any easier;
And people aren't getting any less sleazier;

With each passing minute these waves grow stronger;
And it would seem as though my trip on rough seas grows longer;
I've been out here too long and im growing sick;
Between life and death i feel i must pick;

Unfortunately something inside me pushes me to die;
Pushes so hard i breakdown and i cry;
I fight and I scream but no matter how loud;
Not a soul can hear me in my mind's thunder cloud;

Why is it so quiet in this world of distraction?;
So strange are these people and items of abstraction;
Why, to be heard, must i take away my voice;
Ask not to be mourned and rather have people rejoice;

Please don't push me any further away;
I'd really rather not leave you this day;
I can feel something taking over;
Its killing me, I think i have too much anxiety.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-04 11:46 AM

good job. but dieing is never the answer, the good things in life are worth waitinng for.

JJ

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

2 posted 2008-04-04 04:11 PM

Great poem.....agreed wit hiddensmiles the way i see it is why turn to death when tomorrow you could like win the lottery LOL i'm hyper today weird things are coming from my mind sorry but yeah good write

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

3 posted 2008-04-15 08:56 PM

jesse...i know i've said stuff like this before, but things always get better. i know its been a while since you wrote this, but i'm just reading old stuff...and i realized how well written this is...and just had to comment on it...

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-04-15 09:08 PM

wow nice! andi totally agree with Shawty and Hiddensmiles.

~Zach~

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