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hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-13 08:33 PM

(no one will get this, to be honest i dont know if i really get it either, but i put it on anyway)

my respect for you
has now burnt
to the ground
like a tree
caught in a
forest fire

how it happened
i do not know
but when you
dont stop lieing
it does
not help
at all

your
self centered
uncareing
and cuel

there is no
reason i should
even
talk to you

but i still do
there is not
much else
i can do

because
i would rather
not tell you
the truth

JJ

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-14-2008 05:35 PM).]

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-04-13 08:38 PM

Respectful Notions Of A Heated Heart

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-04-13 10:37 PM

I understood it... great write sweetie
Krysti

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-04-13 11:33 PM

I understood it. really nice

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

4 posted 2008-04-14 11:31 AM

i get it i get it lol i lik it mucho

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

5 posted 2008-04-14 05:23 PM

JJ is this poem about me? Because when i look at my self next to you I kinda feel that And if it is i wouldnt be mad. I promise.

*-crazycece-*

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-04-17 06:33 PM

thank you guys. ce why do you ask that?

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

7 posted 2008-04-19 01:26 PM

?

JJ

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

8 posted 2008-04-22 08:56 PM

i kind of got it. great poem!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

9 posted 2008-04-22 09:33 PM

I got it. good write, pretty tragic though.

I prefer noon to twilight, but tis a fine line I walk.

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

10 posted 2008-04-23 02:40 PM

I asked it because its what you think of me. You have no respect for me any more because of what i have done.

*-crazycece-*

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

11 posted 2008-04-23 04:44 PM

that is not true! and this is not about u

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

12 posted 2008-04-23 04:45 PM

you are putting words in my mouth

JJ

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

13 posted 2008-04-23 05:27 PM

hey hey,
great poem! maybe fer a title, "loosing faith".
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

14 posted 2008-04-24 06:12 PM

thanks, and i like that looseing faith!

JJ

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