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maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2008-04-23 09:48 PM

hey tell me if this poem is good or nto and i need a title for this poem thanks

you will regret it if u leave me
you will regret it if u let go of me
you will regret it if u loose me
you will regret it if u start missing me
you will regret it
you will just regret it
and u will just want me back
but remember your the one who let me go
your the one who wanted to leave me
but now your going to feel an emptiness feeling in your heart
now your going to feel somethings missing in your heart
but no matter what happens i will always be with you
no matter what happens you will always be with me
you will always stay in my heart
no one can tear us apart
if you want me back
im ready for you to get me back
even though u gave me so much hurt
even though you turned my tears into blood
even though you made my tears drop like the rain and made it into a flood
now its my turn to give u the pain
its my turn to drive u insane
its my turn to make u cry over me
its my turn to make u die over me
its my turn that i will make u long for me
its my turn that i will make u strong over me
but ur the one who didnt like me as a freind
and ur the one who didnt understand
but it was your mistake that u let me go
now u shall take this and regret of letting me go
nwo u will feel how i felt
now u will feel the pain that i felt
now u will wait for me like the way i waited for u
now u will have hope to get me back just like the way i had hope for you
now u will have no one to cope wiht just like the way i had no one to cope wiht
now go into your loneliness crowd
go and think about what u have done to me
go and think about how much you love me
but its too late that u didnt see my love
its just too late probably you will never get me back
because you will notice that your life is going into black
and see what you have lacked
and see what you have lost
which u will never get at any cost
i was the one who wanted to be in your arms
i was the one who got into your charms
now your the one who got into my charms
now ur the one who wants to be in my arms
now your the one who has faith that i will get u back
but ur just rong once you loose me im nto coming back
because your going to realize your mistake
and realize what you have done
you couldnt find the love the love that i have for you
until one day u started to see the love that u had for me
untile one day u started to see how good of a freind i was
untile one day you started to realize and started to understand of who i was
but remember i have noticed how many times u have played wiht my emotions
and caused all these commotions
you made me looked like a toy
you used my feelings as a toy
now im deeply hurt inside
but i do want you back
but i will make u wait jsut to get me back
and make u regret for it that u have lost me

BY MEEEEE

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

1 posted 2008-04-23 10:42 PM

This is really good. If I had written it I might have titled it

Regrets
Disregarded Heart
Regret Unknown
Garnish

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2008-04-23 11:02 PM

thanks hehe

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