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23heavens
New Member

since 2008-04-02

Posts 8
India

0 posted 2008-04-05 08:12 AM

Sittin here all alone I am,
Lost in my own world...
My mind drifts away,
To thoughts of this beautiful girl...

Theres so much to this wonderful person,
So much people dont see...
Behind that beautiful smile
Is someone just like me...

Lost in thought she is,
Sitting there all alone too...
Wondering if those hopes and dreams of hers,
Will someday ever come true...

Theres meaning to every word she says,
And every word unspoken...
Theres so much sorrow inside that soul,
Something i wish there wasnt...

And yet she smiles,
That sweet smile of hers...
Hiding deep inside herself,
All her pains,sorrows and fears...

So I sit here wondering,
"What on earth did i do?"
To deserve such a wonderful friend,
So beautiful,pure and true...

And every night before I sleep,
I thank god for this friend...
My crazzy n dear Moonlite,
Friends till the very End..!!!

"Your not Alone"

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-05 04:19 PM

so very beautifully penned!!! love the read.
beautiful indeed.

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

2 posted 2008-04-07 06:34 PM

beautiful.
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-04-07 06:55 PM

i love this!! great ps(library)

JJ

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

4 posted 2008-04-10 11:23 AM

not jus beautiful but freaken beautiful (excuse my "foul" language) well written

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

5 posted 2008-04-22 09:43 PM

great poem!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

6 posted 2008-04-23 12:56 PM

Very sweet and heart felt that is an amazing piece

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

7 posted 2008-04-23 02:38 PM

This was so beutiful, like every one else said. I loved it. Really enjoyed reading.

*-crazycece-*

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2008-04-24 08:11 PM

Darlyl i absolutly loved this!!!!! WOW great write
Krysti

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