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Teen Poetry #8

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masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-11 03:51 PM

Hey every one I know this isnt very good. But I just had to let out some of my feelings, and I decided to let them out on paper thank you all for being really supportive.

You cheated
You lied

I was in dismay
And I cried

My dreams....
There fried
No I sit here
trying to hide.

I try to belive
that your not
by my side.
Now I feel
like i'v finnaly
died.

<3

*-crazycece-*

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-04-13 05:11 PM

it always ok to cry when faced with a situation like this. you gotta just be strong and forget this person. they are nott worth your time if they are just gonna hurt yooh.
Best Wishes
Krysti

Ps. Verry well written poem I love it!

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

2 posted 2008-04-13 07:58 PM

aww! sorry!

good poem! i like the middle part the best but everythings really good.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-04-13 08:05 PM

i love this, it's got so much emotion. even though u wouldn't think so because it's so short, but it really is very good. I know you can get through something like this, we all can, it just takes time.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

4 posted 2008-04-14 11:37 AM

i really lik this good job

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-04-14 05:34 PM

NIce write!!

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