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Teen Poetry #8

Missing you tonight

Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2008-04-24 12:10 PM

Hey all, cleaning my room i came across my first poem that i ever written i hope you all enjoy reading it as i enjoyed writing it.

Missing You Tonight

Here I sit alone in my bed
While visions and thoughts of you danced in my head.
I’m missing you tonight
It would make me so happy just to have you in sight

I think that I’m missing your smile the most
I would do anything just to hold you close.
Being away from you for days is just too much
It’s because you have that magic touch.

The stars are in the sky
They cannot compare to the diamonds in your eye,
And the full moon is peeking out
Please give me a chance to see what true love is about.

Well my eyes are beginning to shut
So I guess I have to say Goodnight
These feelings will continue to grow like the deepest cut
As you are the one that I’m missing tonight.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-24 04:54 PM

Nice. this poem reminds me of my ex-girlfriend. i really like this. Great work.

~Zach~

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-24 06:01 PM

nice job!! enjoyed

masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-24 06:26 PM

nice! enjoyed reading.

*-crazycece-*

krad008
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

4 posted 2008-04-24 08:31 PM

that was beautiful

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-04-24 08:52 PM

Oh Chris baby I love this

Great poem. Missed your poems around heer good to have yooh back!

Krysti

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