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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
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0 posted 2008-04-14 08:09 PM


I know I may never again feel your gental moist hands touch mine.

I know I may never again be grasped in your powerfull arms,

I know I may never again look into your beutiful brown eye's the same.

I know I may never again fall face first for your love.

I know I may never get that peice of heart I gave to you back.

I know I may never again love and trust the same.

I know I may never again think of you other than being a heartless trader.

I know I may never breathe another breath after this razor stabs my heart



*-crazycece-*

[This message has been edited by masksrlife (04-14-2008 09:54 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-04-15 10:02 AM


Wow this poem is.. is... very vivid and sort of graphic.

I think maybe a little too graphic for this fourme. But thanks for posting here anyway!!

Have a grat day!!  

~Zach~



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