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Teen Poetry #8

I'll beat you too!

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-10-19 05:00 PM

I feel my curls bounce up and down
And because I'm dancing it's impossible to frown
My face is glowing,
Radiant with joy
As I dance slowly to
"O, Danny Boy"
Not much longer,
A few more steps
I point and bow,
The audience claps,
I turn to the judges
And see they are pleased,
My competitors discouraged,
You just can't beat me
I am the true Irish Dancer
So proud, so well paced
I danced the reel
With amazing grace
A slight skip,
A perfect jump
These are my tips to you
But try to compete,
And I'll beat you too!

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (10-19-2006 09:08 PM).]

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2006-10-19 05:34 PM

Nice write. Very cute. But can you take out the other symbols. This was short , simple and funny, nice to read some unserious stuff once in awhile.

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