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maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2008-04-02 12:33 PM

HEY THIS IS MY OTHER POEM AND PLZ TELL ME WHAT TO TITLE IT AND PLZ TELL ME HOW WAS THIS ONE WAS IT BAD OR GOOD WAS IT IN RHYTHM THANKS HEHE

How can I survive without u
How can I stop loving you
How can I tell u how I feel about you
How can I tell if I fell for you
How can it be possible to tell you
When it only seems impossible to tell you
How can these emotions go away
When they cause all kinds of commotions to come in everyway
How can it be possible to get over you
How can it be possible to let go of you
When Im the one who cant forget about you
When im the one whos in love with you
When im the one who cant shove this love that I have for you
When im the one whos crying in pain
When im the one whos going insane
How can I deal with this everyday
When you’re the only one who I miss everyday
When you’re the only one who I long for
When you’re the only one who I try to be strong for\
When you’re the only one who I see in my dreams at night
When you’re the only one who never leaves my sight
How can I be free from this love
The love that I cant let go of
The love that I cant get over of
How can I stop loving you when I just cant
It just makes me want to cry and repent
How can these feelings go away
When they come back in everyway
How can I let you go  now
When I just want to be with you anyhow
I just want you to put your arms around me
And make me feel like the bird in the tree
When I just want you so bad
And it just makes me so sad
All I can do is remember the memories and the past
Since the time is going so fast
How can I imagine my life without you
Because whenever I think about this my heart just starts to fasten  just for you
I just wish this never happened
And my heart is just saddened
Its all filled up with tears
And it no longer cheers
How can  my mind stop thinking about you
When my mind is only sinking into the thoughts about you
How can my heart be free when its holding on to you
And  doesn’t have a clue of when to let go of you
don’t you think it hurts me
Just think about of how much it hurts me
Its your fault because you wont let me be free
It seems like im possessed by you
It seems like you obsessed me to you
Just tell me hwo can it be possible
When its only impossible
Impossible to let go of you
Impossible to get over you
How can I survive without you
How can I stop loving you
How can I tell you how I feel about you
How can I tell if I fell for you

BY MEEEE

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

1 posted 2008-04-02 02:07 AM

I looove it!

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2008-04-02 07:17 AM

thanks hehe

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-04-02 02:10 PM

hey hey,
really great! it kinda reminded me of Clary and Jace from City of Bones(amazing book!) so yeah, maybe fer a title, can't let go of you or how can i not love you?
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2008-04-02 04:26 PM

how about impossible to get over you and tahnks

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