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Teen Poetry #8

No One - ((dedicated to all my friends: you'll know who you are))

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-03-30 09:34 PM

no one understands
no one knows my pain
how can they all look at me
with hate in their eyes, they’re all the same

they say they know the feeling
of drowning in your tears
they say they know the calling
of being enveloped by their fears

they’re all the same
knocking me down with their pride
their head held high
life is by their side

what will it take
for them to understand me?
I’m not the same as I was before
I never was and I never will be

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-30 10:48 PM

Hey TJ. This poem is really awesome! I love it. I love the flow it gives out. Well any way dont know what else to say really ok but its so good and dont fight with that.

*CrazyCeCe*

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-03-30 11:53 PM

great write i love the flow as well. and your feelings are really shown here.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-04-02 10:17 AM

I am speachless!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

CrimsonTears
New Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 5
Over The Rainbow

4 posted 2008-04-02 03:49 PM

I think it's actually quite good and in depth.

runningwithdoubt---x

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-04-02 03:58 PM

Speachless as in good or speachless as in bad?

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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