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Amic
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since 2008-02-17
Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

0 posted 2008-03-17 02:32 PM


Two, two that yell
Two that fight.
Two that turn to
you and ask, "Who
is right?"
How do you
Decide between
The two
You call you
Friends?

How can you
Choose between,
You best friend
And one you feel
Led to help?

Who is right?
Who is wrong?
There are two
Between these
You must choose.

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-03-18 01:57 PM


yooh dont have to choose.....
Krysti

~frustrated writer~
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Posts 84

2 posted 2008-04-01 11:16 PM


yeah, krysti is right.. it's not necessarily that you'll choose between the two of them.. you 3 can be a good happy circle of friends! the more, the merrier..


wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
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the last place on earth
3 posted 2008-04-01 11:57 PM


I always seem to find myslef stuck between two people, but Krysti and frustrated writer are rite

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Amic
Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...
4 posted 2008-04-02 11:08 AM


Thanks guys, Actually though they were fighting when  I met them and now dont get along.  Im kind of the middle man.  But it is kind of getting better...
TheFrenchMonkeySunQueen
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since 2008-04-02
Posts 3
South Dakota, USA
5 posted 2008-04-02 12:48 PM


Hey, this one's about me!

*It's really good too!

I Am The French Monkey Sun Queen!

CrimsonTears
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since 2008-04-01
Posts 5
Over The Rainbow
6 posted 2008-04-02 03:52 PM


This is a really good poem, made me think.  Except, for me, it's not my friends, it's my parents.  Good poem anyway though, great depth.

TJ

runningwithdoubt---x

[This message has been edited by CrimsonTears (04-02-2008 09:43 PM).]

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
7 posted 2008-04-02 08:39 PM


ya at first i thought it was about your parents.awesome write i think lots of people feel this way i know i have.

JJ

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