Teen Poetry #8 |
Two |
Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
Two, two that yell Two that fight. Two that turn to you and ask, "Who is right?" How do you Decide between The two You call you Friends? How can you Choose between, You best friend And one you feel Led to help? Who is right? Who is wrong? There are two Between these You must choose. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yooh dont have to choose..... Krysti |
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~frustrated writer~ Member
since 2008-02-25
Posts 84 |
yeah, krysti is right.. it's not necessarily that you'll choose between the two of them.. you 3 can be a good happy circle of friends! the more, the merrier.. |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
I always seem to find myslef stuck between two people, but Krysti and frustrated writer are rite I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
Thanks guys, Actually though they were fighting when I met them and now dont get along. Im kind of the middle man. But it is kind of getting better... |
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TheFrenchMonkeySunQueen New Member
since 2008-04-02
Posts 3South Dakota, USA |
Hey, this one's about me! *It's really good too! I Am The French Monkey Sun Queen! |
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CrimsonTears New Member
since 2008-04-01
Posts 5Over The Rainbow |
This is a really good poem, made me think. Except, for me, it's not my friends, it's my parents. Good poem anyway though, great depth. TJ runningwithdoubt---x [This message has been edited by CrimsonTears (04-02-2008 09:43 PM).] |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
ya at first i thought it was about your parents.awesome write i think lots of people feel this way i know i have. JJ |
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