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My Oath
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My Oath |
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Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
My Oath Why do those words hurt? They never used to... Did you ever meant a word you said? If only I knew... Seeing you smile subdue my emotions Giving me this eased feeling. But now you have this dead expression Telling me to start worrying. What happened to the person I once knew? The happy, energetic you? Are there really only one same person? Or are there really two? I know there's something wrong But you just can't tell me. But is it that bad? Forcing our bond to stretch slowly? They say curiosity killed the cat And it almost killed me I don't want the same event to occur again So I won't bother and I'll let you be. But one thing for sure I just want to let you know. I want to say something Before the end of this good ol' show. I love you the most I really, really do. So what ever your decision may be I will always care for you. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
WOW you have no idea how pertinate that is to my life! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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TheFrenchMonkeySunQueen New Member
since 2008-04-02
Posts 3South Dakota, USA |
That was really, really good! I Am The French Monkey Sun Queen! |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
I wasn't going to read any poems today but your title caught my eye and then I read your poem and It was just amazing..great job! |
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Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
Thanks guys, I was crying while I was writing this poem... |
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