Teen Poetry #8 |
Forced to die. |
masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
When I plead you to stop, to stop sucking our life from us you walk away. When I complain you deny, you deny that our life is fading. I die slowly but im dieing. And the worst thing of all im forced to die. I have no choice, No choice to live. Live with a scar forever. Blackend lungs and tears. I'm suffacating in your mistakes. I cant get out from the smoke surrounding me never leaving. The smoke only the starting for my life. The smoke already starting to be my addiction. You may love us. But do you love us enough to quite. Quite something that has addicted you for years. That is addicting us, at such a younge age. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write. your feelings are making me cry. keep on writeing them out!! JJ |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
HaHa Thankx JJ I'm glad I can finally get this feelings out they'v been bottalled up for so long. |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
great, great, great great write lol I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
Lol thanx guys i really appreciat the comments |
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