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Teen Poetry #8

Forced to die.

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-01 10:33 PM

When I plead you to stop,
to stop sucking our life
from us you walk away.

When I complain you deny,
you deny that our life is fading.

I die slowly but im dieing.
And the worst thing of all
im forced to die.

I have no choice, No choice to live.

Live with a scar forever.
Blackend lungs and tears.

I'm suffacating in your mistakes.
I cant get out from the smoke
surrounding me never leaving.

The smoke only the starting
for my life.
The smoke already starting
to be my addiction.

You may love us. But do
you love us enough to
quite. Quite something that
has addicted you for years.
That is addicting us, at
such a younge age.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-02 10:35 PM

great write. your feelings are making me cry. keep on writeing them out!!

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

2 posted 2008-04-03 09:56 AM

HaHa Thankx JJ I'm glad I can finally get this feelings out they'v been bottalled up for so long.

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

3 posted 2008-04-03 03:54 PM

great, great, great great write lol

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

4 posted 2008-04-03 04:13 PM

Lol thanx guys i really appreciat the comments

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