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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2008-04-03 12:27 PM



im getting sick
of all my lies
all these times
all my crime
ive killed me
im getting broken and shattered
by myself
can anyone help me
can anyone save me
from myself..
im dead
then im alive again
i cant choose
all i do is try and try
whats the point
i fight to save myself
then i lose
i cant forgive myself
im getting sick

this aint good so yea i just did it right now cuz im actually feeling a little sick cuz like me stomach hurts well yea...

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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
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1 posted 2008-04-03 12:55 PM


ahaha aww hannah!!! feel better baby! n e who this was interesting. cool, not the best but cool and cute.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

2 posted 2008-04-03 12:58 PM


its not supposed to be my masterpiece but ne who i just ate thinking it would make me feel better but it didnt i feel like throwing up no i feel really sick my stomach hurts arrggg sorry ppl for this
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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3 posted 2008-04-03 01:46 AM


awwww poor baby!!! i hope u feel better.
ur poem was still good

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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