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Teen Poetry #8

Smoke

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-01 09:46 PM

The poision that goes into your lungs
that darkens them
The poision that clings on your teeth
that advertises your a smoker

That pain that sits on my heart
knowing its only killing you
That pain that also hits me in the heart
because i know that the smoke is killing your chances
of growing old

That faith of you quiting sometime soon
dead
That faith of having my parents here forever
nomore.

Right this minute, im slowly dieing
Right this second, my longs are turning
even more black.

Just as bad as suicide
Just as bad as murder

Smoking, who ever decided to try it?
Smoking, who ever decided to share it?

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2008-04-01 10:46 PM

interesting thoughts, this poem made me think. good job

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-04 12:49 PM

very good and thought through...

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