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Teen Poetry #8

Sound The Alarms

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-03-30 04:42 PM

i told you to be here
and your obviously not
now im looking around
hoping not to get caught

the alarms are tripped
and i think were both ripped
you said you'd be here
in just a little bit

but you left me here
for all the blame
i took it all
and never said your name

i begged you to be here
and you never showed up
i took the fall for you
with no if's, and's, or but's

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-04-03 07:24 PM

Your talent never ceases to amaze me. Nice write..

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-04 12:44 PM

good job

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-04 04:01 AM

WOW!! Bryan yooh never disappoint me I love this poem!!
Krysti

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-04-04 07:03 PM

If I read to many of these I'll become desensitized!!! This is soooo awesome!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-04-05 05:02 PM

Whoa! this is really good!!

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

6 posted 2008-04-10 09:22 AM

awww i like it!!! good message...

hey look! im finally back on the forum! a milracle!!

really nice poem though i like it because its simple and gets the message accross without added fluff. good job!

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