navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » your not you
Teen Poetry #8
Post A Reply Post New Topic your not you Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Gurl_unknown_11
Junior Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 17
california

0 posted 2008-02-11 03:40 PM



where are you??
i cant see you anymore
what happened to my friend?
the girl who knew who she was
who didnt care what they thought
your not her
your not you
your not the girl you were
i can see the sadness in you eyes
i know deep inside you want to cry

you dont show it no,
insted you smile
a smile can hide a million tears
but i can see threw the smilei can see the hurt and the tears the heartache and pain

but im here
here to wipe those tears that fall
here to mend that pain
here to see you laugh
ill be your shoulder to lean on
your diary to lean on
your hand to hold on too
but most importantly ill be your beat friend ill be herethrough the good and bad.
ups and downs
the smiles and tears ill be here forever!


© Copyright 2008 Raquel - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-02-11 06:10 PM


i like this alot, very good!!


hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-03-29 12:32 PM


wow i cant see why poeple havent replyed to this

.... really shocked ....

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-08 07:29 PM


still shocked

JJ

ShawtySheFly
Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)
4 posted 2008-04-09 11:21 AM


good write i lik it
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-04-09 11:27 PM


yeah!! someone else read it!!!

JJ

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » your not you

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary