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Life is power, power is not life
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Life is power, power is not life |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
Read my words they tell my story Twists and turns, shame and glory Living life to its fullest Some exciting, so at its dullest I liked my life until i lost my hero Then i thought my life equaled zero Life is hard through hard times Diving deeper in pain isn't worth the climbs Further from my friends i went By the time i realized, my time was spent No more knife i said The idea of cutting was cut out of my head Depression is something that can be helped But it silenced me before I whelped Talking to someone is a way But it cannot help me today Life is strange, life is strong Don't hate life that is wrong Forget the past, for you will not live it again Time can't go back ever since the world began Wishful thinking got me through Deserving wealth is so not true Live your dreams, live with passion My dreams have nightmares,thats not my fashion I wasn't alone, there are others Some far away, some as close as brothers No one lives our life, go your way Just remember, every action you will pay Freedom is a right, but why can't some express it The cloth of life needs some to knit Don't let me fall asleep I might not wake up and i don't want you to weep I can't wait to get away You can come or stay i can't make you leave today I'm off to finish my life without treason I will live a long life, without a reason ---------------------------------------------------- Just remember that living life is its own power and having too much power is not a good life. Living life is power, having power is not life --Keagan earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
At first reading this it was like read your story of what happened. But then it went into a metephorical/spiritual thoughs. It sort of through me off cause i'm not use to hearing things like this come from you. Not say thats a bad thing just im not use to it. But don't worry i'll get use to it. Honestly i can see you maturing through your work. Like your able to handle things in a mature/adult way.. srry but i'm just seeing this... its sort of new to me lol  . Great work!!! XxZachXx |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh Keagan such a good flow loved it beautiful words tooh Krysti |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
I'm speechless. Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
could be a song... good job. {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Hey Keagen, Oh this is by far m favourite piece from u.. Emmi is right though, this could most deff be a song. The words are amazing and the prescence behind each word was put there for a reason. Love it hun... Keep writing.. Luv, Jess |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
My mouth is literaly hanging open in amazment! Keagan, I'm so happy for you. This is sooo amazing, both the poem and it's content! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
I to am speechless. This poem is so well written my poems always just come to me but this one sounds so thought out. Wow it the only word left. |
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