Defeat (sequel to masksrlife's Victory)

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Teen Poetry #8

Defeat (sequel to masksrlife's Victory)

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-03-29 02:11 PM

Never had the victory
And I can see that now
For the choice was made but once
And in that horridly real dream
I chose to hate
Fear
Encroached upon my heart
Darkness
Embraced my only youth
My smile
Froze in a self-destroying mask
And I feared all good things
And so I have defeat
I need not feel betrayal
In these chains I’ll betray myself
In defeat I will choose to hate

Thank you masksrlife for posting such an inspirational poem!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-30 08:25 PM

Hey earl. This is really good. And it really fits nicely with victory i like it. The flow is also very good.

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