Teen Poetry #8 |
Not like that |
justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
i want you back as a friend and im sorry i let you down yesterday i cried for a lot of things and God let me kneel down i cried to Him and said im sorry for being wrong im sorry im such a foolish child as i heard them play a song i felt it burn me like the bush in flames i believe im changing im starting to run the right way but this poem is for you and i just wanted to let you know im back as a true christian running towards my true home i know you been through alot of things and so have i my spirit was burning and i truly wanted to die but i know that im saved Jesus bled for me on a special day but knowing He bled for you to(meaning everyone in the world) i pray for you guys as i play my song but to the one im speaking to i want you back as a friend not that kind of relationship but as another christian friend |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
um..this was really great W im proud of u only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
THNX V oh umm crystal was askin again what V and W ment haha |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
welcome, amanda asked too, she said u were wearing the necklace only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
yup i was it twas shinee |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
lol, so was this to me or sum1 else? only a vampire can love you forever. |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
I wonder, what or who really is a true christian? "im back as a true christian" Just me musing out in the open. But musings aside...Nice poem. Although you could have done without some of the repetitive parts, but then again, that's just my opinion. P.S. I've been gone a while, haven't I? We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
well this poem was supposed to be about a person but i started thinking about other things my mind was just thinking for itself so yeah true christian meaning im just gonna follow God but yeah sorry this poem kind of sucked so yeah |
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