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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
why u gotta call me a fake just cuz i didnt got to church dont hate im trying things r just getting in the way Gods testing me right now i can feel it i dont know whats going to heal it but i can go through this trial im gonna keep going another mile no one knows what im going thru so stop cuz i dont feel like telling you so dont call me a fake u dont know nothin theres just things i need to shake sry for da ms spelling>> |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this was really good, but hard to follow. i had to re-read it to catch the rhyming. i still like it alot though |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
yea i agree the ryhmeing scheme is a little off but i like the poem anyway. great job! XxZachXx |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
i didnt call u fake cuz u didnt go on sunday i warned u not to be fake since u missed out on resurrection day i didnt mean it as an insult i meant cuz u are acting like u could care less again which was ur constant fight u said that ur a real christian so i told u to stay that way not wanting to go to church is acting pretty fake im sorry if u took it wrong i didnt mean for u to hurt but u need god more than ever since ur wanting to change, to convert god should be first so dont let things get in the way did he died a bloodly death for YOU just so that u could go astray? God knows what your going thru no one else needs to know but y should he care if u dont even wanna visit him because u dont wanna go? i dont need u to tell me i havent asked i already know so dont act like i lack u want me back as a friend well im going to push and preach ur gunna have to trust me but its God that ur gunna meet i dont need to know cuz i already do but know that im praying, praying for YOU btw church, was bomb, i freaked out but it was prefect for u. only a vampire can love you forever. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
you knoe Leah hunn. you dont have to go to Chruch to be a Christian... you can be with God on your own time. it's kind of like.. going having a party after a funeral. I see no point in it. cos' really if you are there to just remeber and give prayers to that one person you can do it anywhere. Just like you can believe in God yet still not go to church. Hannah very emotional poem. I do admit sometimes we get the wrong impression when people say things. and well you have to understand that this person wasn't meaning to hurt you are call you a fake. they were just trying to help you out, on how they thought would be best. you dont have to go by what they say. but you should at least understand where they're coming from I hope everything works out for you cos. nothing is worse than losing a good friend. Best Wishes Krysti |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
leah i wanted to go but i didnt and i told my dad if u know what i mean i told him about me Krysti thnx i dont want to lose a great friend zack and clock thnx i had to re read it too the rhyming wasnt as good this time |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
o well sry cuz i didnt know. that wasnt the attitude u gave me last night so i idnt know. u did? omg wut happened? call this instant!!! only a vampire can love you forever. |
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