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Teen Poetry #8

A Crimson Curse

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-03-18 09:31 PM

Crimson tinted garbage
cans, lined up and
down the street,
Painted with sorrow
and the stench of
regret; Begining ebb
away in defeat.

Crimson tinted daggers,
standing in the street,
guarding the inocent
children dancing at their
feet.
Time is ticking by,
how much longer will they
last?
Time is running out,
tomorrows today will soon
be the past.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-03-18 10:16 PM

Awesome write here. It's how I feel when I'm living in a world where everything is tinted and nothing is as it seems. Good job.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-19 02:31 PM

oh wow Emily!!! this has got to be one of my very favorites from you!! amazing write!!!
Krysti

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-03-19 04:02 PM

Time is running out,
tomorrows today will soon
be the past. this was really inspiring, great job

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-03-20 08:12 AM

amazing emily!!

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2008-03-20 09:34 PM

Emi.. Love this. your so inspiring. Love your work.. Happy Easter btw...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2008-03-21 12:41 PM

Thanx guys, i appreciate all the comments.

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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