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Teen Poetry #8

Try Not To Cry

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-03-16 08:54 PM

i wish you could see
the world through my eyes
understand what i see
and try not to cry
its nothing but failer
made of hate and lies
and being used to the feeling
of never being right

failer is the taste in my mouth
that makes me choke
but i gag it down

lost, cold
and left all alone
i'll just wait this out

i wish you could see
the world through my eyes
understand what i see
and try not to cry

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-16 11:06 PM

wow Bryan.. I really do love your work another great post

Krysti

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

2 posted 2008-03-17 11:41 AM

WOW thats wat i've got to say....i loved it!!! it was ridiculous now thats some good poetry.

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wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-03-19 03:46 PM

some how you managed to capture my thoughts. great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

4 posted 2008-03-20 05:51 PM

I LOVED IT..

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

5 posted 2008-03-21 12:17 PM

wow...this was straight up amazing..i loved it

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BloodFairy18
Junior Member

since 2008-02-22

Posts 12
Canada

6 posted 2008-03-21 06:29 PM

i really liked this poem ,
i love the see the world through my eyes and try not to cry , its awsome , hope to read more from you

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