Teen Poetry #8 |
a unfaithful friend |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
With every breath Your blade goes in deep I cry tears of blood Your blade of innocence seeps as i weep "Why did you do this?" I gasp while i lie on the floor I'll never trust you! Nevermore... Your deceteful lies Hidden behind your face I wish not to see you again But you had to do it. that was your case I cry in the corner Never sleeping I lie in wait Alway weeping With one final gasp The deed is done My light went out Like the setting sun -------------------------------------------------- I was writing about a friend who turned out not to be a freind of mine... so don't take this literately. ~Zach~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
awe, this is so sad! And it's got to be your best poem yet, Great job. ......did someone say library..? {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
Great poem. As always. ^^ Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride. |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
GREAT JOB!LOVED IT |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great poem i know how you feel |
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starpower Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 82Utah |
Wow that was a good poem You can send me an email, |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
everything i expected from you. |
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