Teen Poetry #8 |
Bitter Feelings, Bitter Ends |
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this rancid taste is in my mouth its just something that i cant get out its on my tounge like cheap champaigne and no matter what i do it wont wash away just burn me more and spark the flame just ride this out and feel the change bitter feelings bitter friends they alway meet with bitter ends |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
isn't any kind of ending like this, bitter? I mean if it wasn't you would never move on...when it doesn't work, it's a lesson. What did you learn that you liked about this person, or...this KIND of person? What did you learn that you didn't? Then when you meet someone else, you will be quicker at recognizing those things you want in a girl/young lady. And after a few dozen heart breaks, when you meet "the one" you will know. Take it for what it was, and move on. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
i like this alot great write! |
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~frustrated writer~ Member
since 2008-02-25
Posts 84 |
nice write1 can relate to this.. |
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