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Teen Poetry #8

the name of the snow

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

0 posted 2008-03-13 08:44 PM

falling
soft and silent.
letting the air
shape your every cresent.

the bitter love
recieved from
a drift,
sleeping in a bed
of white death.

one lonsome,
floats
through the chilled sky.
looking for a safe place
to spend her last
night.

catch me in your eyelash.
i simply need to be with
you.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-03-13 09:20 PM

Is it talking about a tear drop? thats what it sounds like. Anyway, great poem hun. I'll always be here, no matter what.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

2 posted 2008-03-13 10:03 PM

Wow thank you for that wonderful poem that you put on here and it has a spot in my heart, and keep wirting your heart out to the world so they all know we can wirte poems for eveyone

You can send me an email,
Thanks

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-03-13 11:58 PM

yea i sort of agree with Em is it rain or snow?

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

4 posted 2008-03-14 09:49 PM

hey hey,
srry fer the confusion. it's kinda like the snowflake represents me, and how quickly life goes by. like i'm asking fer a friend before i have to die, someone to cry fer me.
thanx fer reading,
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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