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softballstar Junior Member
since 2008-03-11
Posts 15USA |
Hey I wrote this yesterday after I had a fight with my boyfriend. I'm thinking about giving this to him but I think that's kinda mean if I break up with him through a poem but.. idk tell me what you think. BREAK-UP I gave u a second chance even a third and forth but this time i will walk away with no regrets or remorse I really thought u were the one to stay forever and true I love u more then anything I'm sorry but were through I'll always remember the times we had and never ever forget a part of me will always love you but u had forgotten respect i do however want u to know that you have been forgiven just promise me you won't forget and continue to keep on living Hopefully we'll still be friends cause I will always care even though were not together remember ill always be there please understand i love you but i can't do this without trust and now that is no longer moving on is a must |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this is a GREAT POST!! for a first time posting. I really like this and on your problem. maybe you should give this too him. if your seriously are going to break up with him then i think you should. its a easy way to let him go without him getting upset. This poem is deffenently going in my library! and i almost forgot welcome to PIP!!  |
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softballstar Junior Member
since 2008-03-11
Posts 15USA |
thanks and yea i gave it to him told him we done but still either way we were both upset but theres nothing i can do about that |
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starpower Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 82Utah |
Hey that was a great poem and I am sorry that you had to break-up with your boyfriend and I had to break-up with my own boyfirend. You can send me an email at [email protected] You can send me an email, |
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