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krad008
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since 2008-02-20
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0 posted 2008-03-13 07:24 PM



Beauty
Precision
Timing

It all leads to everything
Slow down though

Timing means everything
Precision determines timing
Which leads to beauty

Im in love with a Star
Shes first on my to be with list

What a beautiful world this is.......
Full of coruption and hate

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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1 posted 2008-03-13 10:16 PM


Beautiful, an interesting expression. I like it!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

starpower
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since 2007-04-10
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Utah
2 posted 2008-03-13 10:19 PM


Wow that was a good poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

krad008
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 82

3 posted 2008-03-13 10:32 PM


thanks Its different
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