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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-03-06 08:19 PM


speak truth
if you can
i dont believe
that you understand

that when i say truth
i mean whats real
not what you think
makes you hard like steel

so many things
i cant believe
its just every days
a new catastrophy

your my serpent
with a silver tongue
able to speak
when you come undone

but what will you say
when ive caught this rat
that seemed to fall
right into my trap

so speak truth
if you can
i hope that now
you can understand



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since 2008-01-31
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1 posted 2008-03-07 08:06 AM


wow this is really good!!
Amic
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since 2008-02-17
Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...
2 posted 2008-03-07 01:43 PM


This is amazing! I love your work
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-03-07 02:51 PM


True enough CO, true enough.
But simple truth is not always the easiest thing to hear, and you have to want to understand it.
Some people never find it, some of those hide behind riddles and complex understandings, others are confused but try to express themselves simply, only confusing matters more.
This was a very deep peice of work and masterfully writen! Of course no less than I've come to expect!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
4 posted 2008-03-07 03:49 PM



great write


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