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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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speak truth if you can i dont believe that you understand that when i say truth i mean whats real not what you think makes you hard like steel so many things i cant believe its just every days a new catastrophy your my serpent with a silver tongue able to speak when you come undone but what will you say when ive caught this rat that seemed to fall right into my trap so speak truth if you can i hope that now you can understand |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow this is really good!! |
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Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
This is amazing! I love your work  |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
True enough CO, true enough. But simple truth is not always the easiest thing to hear, and you have to want to understand it. Some people never find it, some of those hide behind riddles and complex understandings, others are confused but try to express themselves simply, only confusing matters more. This was a very deep peice of work and masterfully writen! Of course no less than I've come to expect! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write |
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