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Teen Poetry #8

for a friend

violet-dark
New Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 6
chile,santiago in south america

0 posted 2008-03-06 12:22 PM

So you showed me love when all I ever knew was sympathy,
empty words were all I'd see no more than endless empathy,

and there you were so faithfully, my trust in your sincerity,
your words then brought me clarity my doubt exchanged with certainty,

those precious things you gave to me I never thought you'd take from me,
I gave my love so gratefully and lost it all so miserably,

searching for the words of which your blind eyes seemed they couldn't see,
never understanding what to you was worthy reasoning,

loosing touch of things I felt before this tragic memory,
wishing you would see my pain before I'd loose my sanity,

everyday I saw myself with you and yet it couldn't be,
hoping you would bring me back to days of silent ecstasy,

wile bearing all this hurt inside I pushed away my agony
pleading in my heart to end this tourtourious eternity,

hoping time itself would heal the wounds I could not remedy,
I've tried my best to break away but only you can set me free.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-03-08 01:40 AM

omg this was awsome i loved it. are u new? if so WELCOME TO PIPTALK!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-12 01:29 AM

nice first post i loved the flow and rhyme in it..

Welcome to Passions

Krysti

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-03-12 09:38 AM

very beautiful. and great first post!!

Have a nice day.

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

4 posted 2008-03-12 11:52 AM

I absolutely loved it, wow! this was a great poem. nice flow throughout the repetitive rhyming.if your new WELCOME! WELCOME TO PIP. I will be looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

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