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Teen Poetry #8

when Jesus arrived..

~frustrated writer~
Member

since 2008-02-25

Posts 84

0 posted 2008-03-05 08:47 AM

i doubt if they do really know me,
flaws-that's what they always see;
in *their nest, i am a loner
with *them, i am a joker.

*here, the only friend i've got is my turtle
the only things that can relate to me are pen and paper;
always alone in the dark,
can't even see any spark.

i feel like a stranger
everyone don't bother,
couldn't they figure out?
all i need is someone to talk to without a doubt.

i am tired of being in this place,
tears keep falling down on my face
as i was writing this phrase;
hoping that my anger will now be erased.

i thought nobody understand me
and it will always be,
but then i was wrong and i realized...
that i am not all by myself when Jesus arrived..
*their-family
*them-friends
*here-in the house

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

1 posted 2008-03-15 01:14 AM

That was a wonderful poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-03-15 01:32 PM

omg i loved this poem, this was an amazing write. the second to last and the last were my favorite stanzas. great job!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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