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ily06.12.07
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since 2007-11-24
Posts 15


0 posted 2008-03-15 11:29 AM


She gave me my name,
Her talent came along with it,
I never knew his name never once saw his face,
but they all said I looked like him.

He came home and shortly I became his little girl,
Who knew she hid me from his world.
She tortured my soul,
Hooked me to her ways.

Then she left,
I became a normal little girl wit a past,
Till this day Im reminded of what I once was,
Things changed I no longer had a tortured soul,
no longer followed her ways.

I try my best not to become her,
but with every step I take I feel like her,
They all say the same " Lexis your just like your mother!".

Im not her shes not me,
My name is Alexis and hers is Colleen,
I dont know what you see in her that you see in me,
but I tell you over and over again Im just being me.

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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-03-15 12:50 PM


this is really good. i think you put down what you felt very nicly here.  
starpower
Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 82
Utah
2 posted 2008-03-15 02:58 PM


This is a great poem and keep up the wirting

You can send me an email,
Thanks

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