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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
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0 posted 2008-03-14 11:44 PM


This is life
To be compared
Friends
Family
It's all the same
Flying high
Head swimming
Legs weak
Arms flailing
Compared
Reflective work
Bored
What works
Making sense
Copper tone
Heightened sense
Smelling liquid
Red and wealth
Flying high
Head swimming
Legs weak
Arms flailing
This is what it feels like
Being compared


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starpower
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 82
Utah
1 posted 2008-03-15 12:43 PM


Hey that was a great poem and you can send me an email

You can send me an email,
Thanks

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